A Lost God

Better than average, far from masterpiece.Plot and character development start OK, but seems to halt post ch. 100. Before this point MC had plan other than just get stronger. He tested thing, gathered information and made plans how he wanted to progress, but after chapter 100 there is non of it until ch. 167 which is last chapter at the time i am writing this. In those chapters MC just becomes observer in plot and goes with anything while opportunities to get stronger just shower him like no tomorrow without any contribution from himself. And any setbacks get resolved in mater of few chapters with MC getting stronger in process this ties up to...Another issue, tension, that just does not exist post separation with his mother. Since if only thing MC risk is his life in story like this, it is clear that he will survive otherwise there would be no book. That is why risk to other people / things he gets attached to is only real risk in stories like this (that are not like game of thrones where anyone can die) and that is only true if he actually loses something. That could have been done with his party during first dungeon if we didn't get dragon POV explaining that he actually didn't lose anything. Followed by his fox being at risk if it ever shows up again. But as it stands now there are no risk.

Pathetic MC. At about 50 chapters the MC decides to give all the gold he still haves to a random beggar on the street insted of actually doing something useful with the money. Always trying to help and stuff its honestly just too much for me can't continue reading the book it sucks because it has an interesting plot. Read at your own risk if you enjoy the basic hero trying to help every body MC well this is a good read. Please note that i am at chapter 50 so it might change in the future idk.

It's a good read if you're looking for something quick to read but turning off your brain is a must before delving into this.But I'm sure despite the black holes that are coming left and right, you can still have a chance on patching them up

TLDR: Needs work but it is still better than most novels on WN. Don't pass it up!This review will be written in three parts, first is an analysis of the story, second will be on the writing style, and third will be the conclusion.Story:Aside from some cliches, and a generic fantasy world, the story is quite enjoyable. Cliches are cliches because people like them, right?I will completely look over the fact the author turned the MC into a 12-year-old boy, though, because it will provide the MC with four years to grow their pool of MP.The MC used Fireball and Inspect, but when creating a "bo

still sad, unhappy, stressed and hurt.

Xiao Qiangwei: Normal footwork is done just for dodging and slightly confuse the opponent while gaining balance of your body, if you are good with that technique, then you are able to create after-images, but if you master it, then you are able to create illusions, confusing not only one's five senses, but their spiritual senses too.

"Namjoon i'm sure you are aware in what I was actually trying to do, and I am as straight as it gets, well compared to you especially."

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