So far there are three stories in Webnovel that caught my eye: Lord of the Mysteries, Thriller Paradise, and this one. This novel is ACTUAL quality; unlike many of the stories here that are roughly written and poorly crafted, and are alluded with the undeserved 5-star ratings they have. Reading the first chapter, you can clearly see how much the author had polished and built the plot, characters, and world-building. If you're here expecting LoHP or King's Avatar, this story isn't for you.
Hi ,This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via shirleymiller@ficseek.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyShirley
I'm not too familiar with system novels bcz I haven't read a lot of them. I know they're currently mainstream but this one doesn't fall very short. I've read a few chapters now and I decided it's about time I gave a review on it.Synopsis: Not bad. It's detailed enough to get the reader to understand what the book is about and it doesn't betray your expectations.Writing Quality: This isn't bad but it isn't perfect either when it comes to grammar. The word choices are okay and it's fluent enough for anyone to read. However, I noticed a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and sometimes unnecessary wording. I know it can be difficult to get your English perfect because it is a tricky language but the grammar isn't bad by any means. It isn't perfect but it's FAR from unreadable. Good work.Story Development: IMO, this isn't bad. As stated before, I haven't seen many system novels because they aren't exactly my cup of teaching (Apart from Solo leveling. That was fire🔥 lol). However, from what I've seen, the book at the very least has potential. It's just up to the author to do what he can to bring out the full potential of this book. Many will gravitate to it if this is done right. I am certain of that.Character Design: I don't usually mark for this because it's up to the reader's preferences sometimes, whether or not they want described characters or if they wish to use their imagination. However, I'm a fan of descriptive writing. It brings flair and pizazz. Updating Stability: From what I've seen so far, updates are constant enough. The author doesn't lag very much. Readers will appreciate that.World Background: IMO, could use a little more flavor. I hope I'm not forgetting anything cause I tend to have a forgetful memory when it comes to smaller details. However, the world background isn't bad but it could use more. As stated before, I'm a fan of descriptive writing so yeah.Overall: This book isn't bad and it has potential without a doubt. Currently, to be 100% honest, it doesn't seem all that binge-worthy to me as I could hardly find much motivation to read more than 2 chapters a day (But don't let this bother you. Few books give me that binge-worthy feeling). However, as stated before, the book has potential and the author seems creative enough to go further. Readers, support the author and you'll have a FANTASTIC story. Message to the author: I know writing can be difficult, speaking from my experiences. However, don't give up. If you enjoy writing then keep at it and you'll get better without a shadow of the doubt. You'll sometimes see collections fluctuate. Today you might gain 3 then tomorrow you lose 4. But that's all part of the process. Don't be afraid of going back through older chapters and making adjustments if you deem it necessary. And most of all, don't give up. Remember this always; if you don't like the story you're writing then there's a high chance that the readers won't either. So have confidence and good luck!
Ashley called her friend Shen and asked to pick her up at her condo so they can go together in "The Place" which their batch reserved for their party. Shen is her friend since first year in College. Ashley doesn't have a lot of friends due to her personality not because she is rude or a bitch but because she just can't trust all the people around her, this is something her dad taught her while growing up. It is also one of the reason why she never go on a date plus she think that Boys will just take her for granted as she is the successor of the Biggest and high rated law firm in Asia.
The tunnel was kaleidoscopic. Other tunnels branched off left, right, above, and below as James hurtled through without any sense of direction. Thoughts flashed through his mind like:
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