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Popular Reviews
The main character stands out due to his awareness that he's in a fictional world, creating an uneasy dynamic with other characters and occasionally catching the attention of readers in the real world. Here's a rephrased list of pros and cons:
Pros:
1. Smart and resourceful MC
2. Well-developed supporting characters
3. Engaging storyline
4. Exciting scenes with unique and creative uses of abilities
Cons:
1. Predictability per manga update; more variety would be appreciated, even without the MC's presence
2. Not suitable for those seeking high-octane action; many fights lack excitement, possibly due to the trope of主角 always winning
The reviewer appreciated the engaging climax and the unique concept of the mysterious character Su Bei sacrificing for the protagonist, which initially piqued their interest. The dynamic between the tease-like character and others was intriguing. Despite acknowledging the translator's efforts, the story faced some issues.
The main drawbacks mentioned were excessive spoilers, particularly in the later chapters, which might deter potential readers. The author's approach to developing certain plot points felt underdeveloped, like the student council's ambition, and the主角 Zhao Xiaoyu's growth停滞 after her initial boost.
The reviewer was disappointed with the lack of character development for Zhao Xiaoyu and Mu Tieren, feeling they deserved more interaction and growth arcs. The portrayal of the protagonist group's reactions in the "Weixi Holy Land" arc seemed out of character and inconsistent.
Additionally, the reviewer found the use of the "Destiny" intelligence organization as a plot device unsatisfactory, as it felt forced and not properly explored. The story could have benefited from a deeper background on Su Bei's past and the organization's founding.
Su Bei's character became repetitive, with predictable patterns, which detracted from the story's excitement. The sudden and bland death and resurrection left the reviewer unimpressed, especially considering the build-up.
Lastly, the ending was a letdown, with rushed and unsatisfactory resolution, plot holes, and dangling loose ends. The author's handling of Su Bei's character and the overall narrative felt disappointing.
While the reviewer loved the characters and original ideas, the numerous issues led them to lower their rating. They hoped future readers might enjoy the story more, despite their personal reservations.
However, I have a small gripe that's been bothering me. The author lacks understanding of the manga production process, despite writing about a manga setting. Although it's not a major issue since it's a novel, for someone with some artistic background, there are many details in the story that seem out of place. The author claims that the manga updates occur weekly, but in the first chapter, the protagonist muses that the update might only happen after solving a murder mystery – a task that typically takes multiple chapters to resolve, even in popular series like Kindaichi or Detective Conan. It's especially baffling since the manga is just starting its second season and introducing new characters, including two joining the main group.
The author tries to cram all this action into a single chapter: character introductions, getting involved in the murder mystery, investigation, and capturing the culprit. How on earth does that fit within a weekly update format? The pacing feels rushed, considering the length of the story and the promised frequency of updates. If I were the artist, I'd question my decision to work on such a project.
I admit it might seem like a trivial complaint, but for someone writing about manga characters, the author seems unaware of the constraints and expectations of the medium. In the next chapter, it turns out there was a special 'event' for the manga creator, which wasn't previously disclosed. While it's understandable that the author might need an explanation, it's surprising that readers didn't notice the extensive effort required for such a lengthy narrative. I guess one reader pointed out the issue, leading to the clarification.