A Broken House and Dead Bodies

Please update more. I'm loving this new set of story. Good luck

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The main character is likeable, kinda dumb at times bit that's perfect for 16 year old , it would be irritating if he would be too smart or ruthless.  But the pacing is getting slower and slower , the side characters are also being beautifully developed, the system is too omniscient though, I had only one issue with it that the pacing is too slow , it been more than 100+ chapters but it hasn't even been a week in the novel , the length of the updates are too short and it's only one chapter a day or two , seriously dusturbs the flpw of the reader

I picked this book up when it my boi  Han was just leaving for space and that was arround chapter 300.  Thinking how the autor posted about a chapter a day means that this book has been in that making for a little over 4 years.  This book was with me through high school and it feels amazing to see it come to such a great close.  I hope the best for the author and translators.

in first i thought MC well take revenge or atleast his childhood friend will find out the truth but now author rush the ending with so many plot holes that can be improve if author took some time improve plot because so many stuffs are missing in it like what happen to the parents of MC, MC got little harem no romance scene to make mc and his harem to feel more connected, give one smut chapter of childhood friend and her BF just to add betrayal element in it which every story if it's not treated properly then it can lack luster only betrayal element keeping this story together even those gods , angels or demon element didn't remove that main driving point like betrayal , huge disappointing thing is no MC/his girls smut, no satisfying revenge author said not to focus on revenge (b*tch you story roaming around from the start ) huge disappointing  , childhood friend didn't find out truth to make her regret, reason behind why everyone hate MC or remove that effect ,and rush ending ( huge waste of time , waiting a lot for new chapters to read for revenge and novel ends it was a hug disappointment) and may little bit too much ntr element that didn't make any sense.🤮

the initial progression of the story is great but now its just bad. ............................................... really bad and boring, i can understand why people at the start are so hyped and as the story progress they just don't bother anymore .. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

First of all, thank you for the efforts you put into this story and still leave it free to read. When I looked for new novels, I didn't think I would find a hidden treasure here. I can't understand how this story is still so unknown, but I look forward to how your story progresses.I normally don't write any reviews, but I want to show my support to the author and the great work.For Writing Quality, there is really nothing to complain about. I didn't find any grammar mistakes, which would have interrupted my reading experience. I can't say much to the chapter updates, since I binged the novel up until chapter 83, but I think they are okay. Definitely something to look forward to, when a chapter is released. The Story Development is where I have to take away a star, since from the point when Loran was hurt by the Iron ant (crippled his hand), I lost some of my first optimism for the story. I'm just glad that I still continue to read, because oh boy, that game update in recent chapters with the introduction of the magic system delivered and I'm quite happy that Loran goes for the magic build now.A major point, which actually helpd the story in my opinion are the different POVs of the main cast, that helpf in further developing their character design. My favourite characters as of chapter 83 are Loran, Yin and Yang. I really hope that Yin will find happiness, since her situation seems to be really bad. On the other hand, I'm not quite sure if I like or hate the character of Zed. The world background is steadily being updated as we journey with the main cast. I actually like the village building aspect of the story and hope to see more of the world and other player bases as they appear throughout the story. I'm also wondering if there are any NPCs and their settlements.

I'm loving this fanfic, I'm just hope that the author don't drop it ................................................................................................................................................................................