Your Typical Reincarnation Story

What devils!  Well torture is my cup of tea so i am having the time of my life.  This is a good one Author.

The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.

It's questionable how something entertaining like Very Pure and Ambiguous: The Prequel is related to this story at all. Super bland and the progression in the story is very boring.

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Sorry but I read the first few chapters and this wasn't very good. I sort of like the premise but it doesn't feel like the author wants to take the time to actually think about or write a story. Just look at how it starts. We don't get a chapter about the mc's previous life. We don't get one about him getting his system. We don't get a chapter where he makes a serious attempt to recruit people that wasn't moronic and obviously going to end with cops chasing him (He actually needs a mental hospital if he thought recruiting small children in front of their school was a good idea, regardless of whether his cultivation is real.) We don't get any explanation for why he thought that was a good idea or why he was that desperate outside of what we know from the summary. We don't get any real comedy that wasn't just rehashed from the summary. All we get is MC tries to kidnap children and doesn't get arrested for some reasonMC laments his incompetenceMC eavesdrops on old manMC tries to convince old manOld man agrees out of pityThe premise is fun like I said but it feels like the author is putting the minimum amount of effort into the actual story. I thought maybe it would get better in the next chapter but the author didn't even want to write about the MC finding more students. Instead for some reason the old man calls a bunch of his friends over so that the MC, and more importantly the author, don't have to put even a small amount of effort or thought into that issue. Then in the third chapter the MC gets clones who can cultivate for him so he can continue to put no effort into life. It's like the author's laziness is infecting his character...

As a reader, I like to know what is going on.The introduction is rough, and I don't even know if this is a game or a transmigrator etc. Until later on. It has potential but I am too distracted to enjoy.

                         Bursting in tears, he sank to the ground.