The story at the beginning is very good but over time it gets lost and becomes monotonous and boring, the protagonist loses all his personality, after he separates from Greeg's family, he becomes a robot, he just does everything perfectly, he studies, cultivates, trains, sleeps, eats, etc., in a perfect way. And all the "problems" and "difficulties" he might face will be solved by his heavenly power. He just has eyes that can see everything, he has the best and fastest cultivation, he thinks faster, he learns faster to the point where everything his hundreds of years old masters can teach is learned in 3 years. he does all the other stuff. Basically the development in the novel is not automatic. And although the author tries to sell the protagonist as a VERY SMART guy, he can be pretty dumb, like when he didn't go to his father to train with him and save humanity after 1 year of training.
There are things i like about this story and others I really don't like. Despite being modeled after your basic Wuxia novel, I like that AGB has a unique world with a pretty cool cultivation system, However, my biggest gripe is with the MC. He's apparently 6 years old and thinks, talks and acts like an ***** but you've given no explanation for why that is. It's not like he's reincarnated. Also, the MC is plain dumb. He's made at least half a dozen bad decisions in first 5 chapters.All in all this would be a much better read if the MC's character traits are ironed out.
The storyline is quite unique and it immediately piqued my mind. Though generally I don't prefer this genre but this novel changed my views completely. The story development is also quite good and at pace.Keep your hard work on! Good luck!
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