A great story so far and everything but I just want to ask does Hana actually end up with that Julius guy I personally think it would be better if Hana also gets together with Riley (they not blood related)
Honestly i feel a bit guilty in rating it 2 stars. For 200 or so chapters this novel is worthy 4.5 stars (I consider 5 stars a masterpice), but starting from chapter 300 something onwards its quality goes down to the point that around chapter 400 it is absolute trash. It is obvious how the author couldn't sustain the required chapter output and the quality of the novel suffered dramatically. The webnovel system, where quantity matter more than quality, reaped another victim.
A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.
As soon I saw the summary I knew this was the kind of style I like where the main character inst a good person, i like when there evil and on the road to destruction
Read it through 240 chapter, finally feels it was good chapter to give it early review. +the worldbuilding 9/10 : nicely explained throughout the the story and no unnecessary info dumps. +the supporting character 7/10 : most of them was very well introduced and some of them still carry aura of mystery to them.+the main character 6/10 : the mc (Vicente) was a neutral evil guy, he is ruthless to his enemy and caring toward his family. but he's character was sometimes feels bland like something is missing. +the plot progression 8/10 : nicely paced not too fast and not too slow but some of the subplot was really unnecessMy only gripe was in where mc and his group went to Pentagram hunting in the forest and they found the guys from magic academy who was attacked by beasts and decided to help them. no problem until this point although i prefer to let them die. but after this and up until the DEAL that he made with guy named joshua (chapter 293-240) because of pentagram that not even his was single the most idiotic and dumb deal that can be avoided. it makes me rethink all of his decision up to this point.
Nothing could be seen in any direction, including from the forest. Havel turned to look upwards, but wouldn't be able to see anything even if there was something. It was nighttime, after all. There might have been enough starlight to make out his immediate surroundings, but not to locate something in the sky.
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