World of Karik

I am glad I always try out new novels without reading the reviews, or else I would miss great works like this one. I am not too picky regarding cultivation novels. But this one really surprised me positively. It has the realistic feeling of a MC that deals with a new reality, growing and adapting himself without forgetting his own principles. I also like the mystery surrounding the origin and purpose of all of these worlds.I really enjoy reading your novel and I went on binge-reading for the last couple days.P.S.: the title is perfect, glad you didn’t changed it ☺️P.P.S.: the fact it’s not premium is a big bonus😁

I really love this piece and its quite inspiring for an upcoming author new to Chinese fantasy stories. Xiao Ming is an interesting character I look forward to in his achievements.

The writing is pretty good. A few minor mistakes, but nothing too serious. The pacing and flow of the story is enjoyable. We get a prologue chapter at the start that establishes a lot about the world and the following chapters do a good job at continuing this.

Clearly, I'm heavily influenced by editing this novel ;p Still, I had to make a review since I'm a harcc0re fellow reader xD I've been working on the novel since the very start, you can say it's my editing baby. Along with it, I'm growing up too, and striving to improve. Let's get things straight; it's not your every day post-apocalyptic novel, you won't find too gruesome scenes like other novels of its kind. Several times, the MC looks like a NPC game character, he's not that talkative but that's what makes him special. He just shows things through his actions, he knows he is weak and he strives to improve. Some people may not like his decisions, but it's still being elaborated why he didn't do something. Some people complain about the short chapters, I on the other hand, not because I have to work less - on the contrary I have to work more to rephrase some lines in order to make the reader 'feel' what's taking place, prefer that the chapters are smaller cause they're not that repetitive and you hardly want to skip lines (once again that's how I feel, you may have other opinions.) I will agree that it resembles dbz fights, but you can still wait for it to pile up and binge read it later, at least that's what I do with most novels ;p Last but not least, I find the concept really intriguing. I mean, a car that can be constantly upgraded? What will it become next, an air-carrier, a spaceship, a Transformer, Gundam, Power Rangers' Megazord? There are plenty of choices ;p That's all I had to say till this point, if anything changes I'll update ;p Thank you for your feedback and your support for the novel ^_^P.S. The updating stability is top-notch, we haven't missed a chapter ;p

" Soon you'll know, first I want you to put these weights on you, each one weighs 20 pounds. " Mia spoke with a calm expression.

Her sword beheaded him cleanly, no pain occurred, everything had happened in less than a second, but despite that, his brain had managed to understand what she had said. His last thought was...

''Certo como a primeira coisa que você pediu para nós foi a situação geográfica irei dar lhe uma palestra rápida e fácil de se entender.

The man said: "I wouldn't be so sure if I were you, little Liza shouldn't you explain to your friend what's going on??".