Seriously... A police officer didnt know face of their emperor, even the civilian they save find his face familiar... wat a dumb chapter, maybe there will be more dumb or worst chapters like this later, so ill just save my self from this bs
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
Originally id give the story a 4 star in uploads, but I cant bring myself to knowing the difficulties of reality. This story while it follows some small cliche, has an incredibly authentic feeling. Highly recommended. :)
Overall an interesting story with some intriguing ideas but very poorly executed, aside from massive time skips, there is barely any interaction between characters, 0 development, world building completely tossed out the window, in 60+ chapters not more than 10 sentences have been spoken between characters, there is no use of the system, no explanation about skills, no quests, it doesn't even feel like a game world(even if it looks like later it will merge with the real world) everything seems super rushed and for the love of god, the chapters are super short too. I enjoy the story somewhat as i find the plot interesting but thats all, an interesting plot and a huge potential wasted.
Hello. This is my first post and I have just finished caching up with your wonderful story. I found your story as an audiobook on "Zephyr Odin Audiobook (Reborn)" YouTube and had to continue it. I hope you continue to stay active and post updates for your story.
Such a sweet book 🤩😍... It truly is well written and is wrapped up really well ... Simply beautiful ❤🔥🌟... Sweet and short the perfect way for any work
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