Woodlander

1075-1078 missing

That's is the reason I can't leave my kids with any family member poor April

This is a decent story especially when you consider similar stories.  You have a very OP concept in the 'power that contains all things' but has a relatively mild influence on the MC.  It is also rarely mentioned or used for anything past the first several chapters from what I have seen.  The main good point of the story is that while the MC is fairly OP from the perspective of his peers, there is constant threat of him being strangled in his 'cradle' before he really fully develops.  He is always struggling for resources but also finds that his consumption is rather great as well. Now the bad.  I realized through reading this story another concept in these Chinese stories that is prevalent and what actually is behind it.  The concept where an elder is always telling the jr or protagonist that it will do them more harm then good to know that information, ect..  In reality this is a symptom of China's extreme censorship and information control, as it really not about protecting the individual, but keeping information that could prove problematic to those in power should it be revealed to the masses.  Of course China is not the only nation that is guilty of this type of information control, but is probably the most blatant offender.

Honestly it’s a decent story but it’s more of a preference thing with me. The whole perfect hero thing really doesn’t sit well with me. For gods sake he’s a vampire, atleast make him less hero-y. And what is this about in all these years in the pit the vampires have only learned to love. I call BS. Total BS. In fact, all they should have learned to do was HATE. With the treatment of the guards and like 99% of vampires pride, there should have been an uprising LONG ago. Hell, citizens of England rebelled because the fuckin taxes were too high. And while they could rule through fear it just leads to more uprisings. Another thing I hate is harems. Idk why but I just find it reaaallly annoying. I’m at like chapter 30 something and he already has 2 permanent wives. There’s still like 170 chapters left. From what I’ve seen I can already tell how this novel is going to go. I’ve seen a lot of great novels with good potential take the harem route and either end up getting dropped halfway through or ends up with like 1k chapters and so many girls I can’t even remember half of them. In fact, I usually don’t really like the MC having a wife/husband or children at all. Don’t get me wrong, I love a good romance story, but in adventure novels like these they almost always just fade into the background and don’t do anything (which at that point, why even add them), or they severely hold back the MC and end up getting kidnapped or something to use against the Mc. I’m just tired of it. Back to the hero thing, I personally prefer a more anti hero, who acts for his own benefits. And seeing as the MC is a VAMPIRE, even if he was a very kind human, should be much less heroic. Honestly, why does he even think that drinking blood is something he should be ashamed of? He had his memories wiped and it should just be natural for him. And wtf is up with him just casually giving away that one precious liquid to the lover guy. Like seriously?!?!!that is the STUPIDEST THING I have ever seen an MC do. another thing, the training seems to be more secondary, and it seems the main subject of the story isn’t him getting strong but saving the vampires. Also random complaint, why did the vampires show disdain when he drank blood from the one wife, if anything they should have been supportive of him. Based on how many times the author mentioned it losing control at the revenant stage should be completely natural and expected. The vampires should have helped him get over this hurdle and not shun him for it. Honestly I know this all comes down to personal preferences. I really tried to read this like you told everyone too as you say it gets better. But it just rubs me the wrong way. Sorry for ranting, this is all just my personal opinion continue on writing however you want to. And I know you probably don’t care as I’m one of many readers you have, but for now (and probably forever) I’m dropping this.

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woow author what a great story I'm really in love with your story you really did a great job author keep it up I love your book   I'm sure we are gonna more of you story

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Overall, I'd say this is a pretty cute and funny story.The plot is fine, a big part in it plays the shop, which I think is made pretty nice. Overall world building is done properly, so you've got a sense of what's going on.Stability of updates is pretty good as well. The only downside to the novel would be writing quality, with some mistakes here and there, but it's readable.