Glancing at the mask through the scope of my rifle, my mind reeled in pain, the Death Qi in my body was agitated and seemed to rapidly be depleted. I pulled away and hid under the cover of the parapet of the roof I stood on. My heart pounding wildly.
Where are we, you ask? We're at the Library. Yes, that's right. The Library. Minerva's great idea was to eat here. Despite knowing the rules, she still dragged me to this place. But you know what? I'm hungry, and I want to eat. So be it!
The worst injuries were, as expected, on her head and feet. Her head collided first to the road while her feet collided with both the car and the electrical pole nearby. She got comminuted fracture in both her legs, bruises all over her, twisted wrists, and heavy concussion.
With the release of the sixth chapter, is this preview already over? Or will you continue to post this story here? Either way, I love all your works and this easily shot up to my favorite.
The start of the novel is pretty confusing and a little hard to undersatnd but after a while things seem to become more clear, but that all i can say since there are only 3 chapter and i will come back when there are 20 or more chapter
i guess i should review my story to push it out a bit. im just going to say some random stuff like i am now to get 140 words in and make it a valid review. anyway if you're reading this, the story is about the main character disobeying the world he lives in and going berserk many times over, leading him to gain the king's attention and become wanted. later on it becomes more apocalyptic, well how i've planned it so far anyway. you'll just have to read to find out. Woah, this is way more than 140 words, i'll post it now
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