What NEET Does When The World Apocalypse

I've finished all 40 chapters and it's a good novel don't get me wrong at all but there is a ton of translation errors to the point sometimes I can't understand who's who not any world development for God sake earth is called blue planet and we learn nothing about his past life either kinda kills the story but if the translation errors were fixed I think this would be at least a 4.3

So far, an interesting novel with nice lessons from the father character, as well as an interesting storyline. However, in the first chapter, there are too many commas in each sentence and many run-on sentences. It gets better after that chapter, but there are still many wrong tenses used, the characters don't really speak their age, and there's incorrect character quotation punctuations and capitalizations (ex- "back then, these were the days!." should become "Back then, those were the days!" To the author, I suggest researching a bit more on quotations by reading physical books in the english language).But these are all pretty small things if you ignore them and just read the story. Pretty good overall, I would definitely keep reading if the author releases more chapters. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next!

My name joy I was in my house one day and see man coming to my door,  and sad who that and he sad him Sam ur boyfriend sad hoo,  but I don't he not not so he enter my

here for the fast pass.....................

"So here's the thing, I will send us to a dimension for training. In there, time runs differently. A minute here is an hour in there. So, we will fight there for an hour. Give it your all, don't worry, I won't get hurt nor you because in that dimension, if we rest for a bit, we will automatically be healed." I nodded again, she smiled.

<p>"The Headmaster has asked me to escort these two ladies here. I have accomplished my task, good day." He said before he tried to run away but Edlyn grabbed his sleeve. He hesitated and stopped in his tracks to watch Edlyn communicate with her hands.</p>

*Somewhere*

Thanks