Warlock on a new Earth

Excellent start. Nice characterisarions. Thorougly enjoyed every line of the story. Looking forward for the next part. This story will definitely rock. Good luck.

So far the story is actually pretty good, even though the concepts have been overused.  I can only hope that this one does not go in the route of the absurd, though the synopses suggested that it would.  I am looking forward to more chapters and would not mind this one being picked.

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Funny and fresh, loving it so far, go Bob! You can find a way to your comfortable life. Will be camping waiting for an update. Will you explain the chicken? Curiosity might kill me if you don't.

Hey author-San wanted to leave a review as well as a question I have…. First my question who is the main female lead, and the romance when we gonna see some development with Adam and whoever is gonna be is counterpart or even harem(which I am rooting for here HAREMMMM) (if you can answer that) Next my review as of chapter 32 I love the story so far honestly have no compliants if I had any it would be the “split personality/primordial Authorities” amazing concept just it needs to fleshed out a pit more for me

I like what's going on with the setting presented in this story. The world is being shown to us via scenes and proper narration as instead of a giant info dump or in some cases, every aspect of the world being presented in the auxilary volume (like a guide). This novel is a good example of how a world should be shown. It's okay if some parts of the world are being told to us, the reader, but it's best to let the rest of the setting be shown to the reader for painting the picture in their minds. There's only two aspects of this novel I have an issue with: some paragraphs are quite big and massive, so it's best to cut them down especially for mobile readers. There's also the updating. I understand if the author has a lot going on other than writing this story, but if I may recommend, it's best to stockpile on google docs; write and edit the chapters, that way if you want to say, upload a chapter a day, it'll be easier. Stories and their respective chapters take time, and you author, have the basis of a good story. I just hope your schedule is managed especially for the readers who have given your novel positive reviews. Good luck.

it is really lovely thise is a series which i would follow personally as a new reader thise is really good

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