Vrmmo Hack3r

liking the story

well I don't know what to say heheheh, first of all the story is good at the early chapters especially when he was op (not really) it's just that as the story continues just like what the author stated in the synopsis that don't apply common sense to the characters, like the MC's father who looked down on him because the 5yrs old mc is hiding something or should I say lying which what they said, after the MC's sister is born then becomes a legendary hero in which the father simply avoid the mc more like removing from his life for years then taught his daughter that she should feel superior because compared to her brother(mc) she is a hero, so yeah this novel have many bumps for me I guessed, however it might not be my cup of tea, but I recommend this novel to those who reads this kind of plot. I don't even know if you guys will understand my review heheheh (bad grammar).Oh right one last thing there are reviews here which are mostly fake accounts if you know what I mean try checking their profile they mostly reviewed only author's novels.

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What in the world is this doing on the top novels. The way it's written is so awful, it just made me want to drop this faster and faster.Like what is wrong with the way the character talk to each others?"Finn Taylor this Finn Taylor that Yvette Larson this Yvette Larson that" like jesus christ innovate at some point. Couldn't even tell you how bad the plot  is even if I tried.

Thought it was a good book at first until reading like 200 chapters in. The author is more focused on describing boobs than actually moving the story forward, the story seems to become more of a harem each chapter I read on. The author just keeps adding more and more female characters into the story and describes their boobs, kind of disappointing.

i really force myself into reading this novel... so so..- the story is about plagia....mmmm i mean bringing the toys from earth to the parallel word, i like the idea but the mc is really childish... and the way he advertise his toys is really annoying.... blazing teens balala fairies... etc etc - and i dont understand the author's joke, so dry...

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The only Achilles heel of this gem is that there are only 5 chapters, apart from that this is really good.That we would be happier with 10 chapters?That is also true.