Ushinawareta kioku : Lost Memory

Soccer novels are great! Systems that aren't completely ridiculous are great! Fun novel in general. (Word filler word filler word filler word filler word filler word filler)

Its a pretty interesting read. Kinda OP MC with Gravity powers and author describes it as a fraction of his vast power. Pretty nice grammer. Nicely done world building. I have some complaints regarding him not using his gravity powers to its full potential, but I can tolerate them with the fact that its been only 2 weeks or so since he got his powers. Good luck.

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I love this novel. Sure its the typical run-of-the-mill wuxia but it has its own beauty...is what i thought until i got to the 900's after which i was thoroughly disappointed...the story is still great but the translations are beyond awful! Half the time im correcting the mistakes and rereading it just to keep going

everything was good except the mc.He was tge biggest letdown of the whole novel. And reason is author wasn't able to portray what he wanted to show. Like from the start of the novel he was hailed as a genius and intelligent guy but throughout the whole novel only thing we saw us how stupid he is. The author even dumbed down the whole world's iq and eq to make him look like a genius yet that wasn't able to hide the flaw of his character. You have to think out of the box to properly write a intelligent character which unfortunately the author wasn't able to.

Personally I have never seen a Chinese Oasis story be good. An Oasis is not a river, let alone a pond. And several authors confused this. Living in an oasis is difficult, there are droughts, the water can become muddy, animals compete with humans for water. Food insecurity, food is little or concentrated in a few.

inconsistent is how i would describe this story . Main character says something but does something else  He wishes to stay out of trouble but gets himself into it. Tries to sacrifice his life for school in which he has 2 friends he has known for a week or so ? Condemns slavery and goes to burn their business yet talks about that he is weak and should stay low. Don't read unless you are into japnese white knight novels

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