Useless rise of the ASHES...

Novel is quite bland. It is rarely enjoyable.The primary concern is that the writing quality is quite low. Author constantly pads the word count with completely nonsensical and useless information which has no impact on the story, coupled with repetition. You can have entire chapters that are nothing but fillers. I will give the most "on-the-nose" example (I just copy-pasted, this is really how it was written in the novel):"Well, my partner has performed some calculations, and he has determined that we will require ten million dollars to mass-produce this rifle. Will the government be willing to add three million dollars?" Poul inquired.Sherman paused for a moment, carefully considering the offer. "If we provide you with ten million dollars, you will be able to mass-produce this rifle. Is that correct?""Yes," Poul replied "we will need ten million dollars to mass-produce this rifle. Is the government willing to add three million dollars?" Poul asked.Sherman was silent for a moment, pondering the offer. "If we give you ten million dollars, you will be able to mass-produce that rifle. Is that what you are saying?"

I have not read the novel. Just sharing one of my views about novels on webnovel (I do have experience of reading on webnovel for some years now).For me, it's now nearly an 'almost' established fact (at least for me) that the more chapters in a novel the worse (or at least boring) it will going to end up.

Didn´t expect the MC to be this dumb. Hopefully this mountain of sh*t of a novel doesn´t get picked. Anyways stay safe and keep away from this.

Kinda different, good to see a new ranking system, names are interesting too.I don't quite understand everything yet but I like the way the story moves from a place to another instead of POV.Interesting story, any updates?

"Okay I will put a call through some other day to tell you who I am, you are smart you might recollect faster than I can imagine."

i mean the green girl that the hero saves

What now?

Abro mis ojos para darme cuenta que no estoy en mi departamento y que hay mucha gente extraña a mi alrededor, lo primero que note es que lo que debería ser mi sucio cuarto en mi pequeño departamento en los suburbios se ha convertido en una lujosa habitación repleta de lujos solo la cama en la que estoy hechado es tres veces mas grande ¡que mierdas esta pasando! al girar mi cabeza veo a todas las personas presentes y pareciera que estoy en una feria medieval que es esto la convención de ñoños de la edad media.