Unwanted By The Beta

This is the best novel that I have read. The part of the kibgdom buildibg is really great, but there is sone issues in my opinion. First of all, there is more granmatical errors in the last chapters that you have released  and they are pretty obvious for me even though english is not my first langage. Secondly, I was a bit taken back by the reaction of henry after his last battle. He was feeling full guilty even though it was not his fault and he was almost dead because of the magician. He has even asked before his subordinate if he has upgraded his kingdom. That’s a lot out of his character and this is showing a very stupid weakness that does not make sense. Before him, his kingdom was trash and now his kingdom is triving because of him. Thirdly, I think henry gave too much importance on earth war strategies and not enough importance for his mana cultivation. Even with the best strategy of the world, it does not mean a thing if his ennemy is like Luna and can crush him like a bug.Also, to conquer the world, it takes a long time and mana cultivation can increase his lifespan a lot. That would give enough time for henry to conquer the world. Also, after his defeat, henry has not even constated that his defeat was due to his lack of mana power and he has only blamed himself like a weak man compared to his old self. Finaly, I have read the last review and I also don’t think that is possible to finish this story with 350 chapters. In my estimate, the novel would have 1000 chapters or at least 700-800 chapters. Please author, don’t ruin the potential of the story just to finish it early.

"Giselle, I find her interesting. She's calm and very gentle yet strong, though she never shows it out. I want her to become stronger and face herself, fighting for her truth."

Baldy saw a cylindrical object throw towards him and since Nate threw it near his foot he didn't dare catch it and drew few steps back while gazing at the object while griping his sword harder.

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After graduation, Shriya decided to drop a year to prepare for higher for certain entrance exams. Living in an expensive city was taking a toll on her and she wanted to earn as soon as possible.

sky: oh h-hey Ethan

Embarrassed at having fallen for such an old gag early in the morning, I brushed off her finger from my cheek and scowled at her – only for that scowl to melt right away when I belatedly noticed something different about Minerva.

While,Tàizǐdiànxià on the other hand was seems to be destructed. He couldn't forget what happened last night, but why all of a sudden? He asked himself over and over again.

Elijah : Its a title for perverted organisms.

Say, Chu Xingyun converges spiritual power, so step forward.

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

honestly it's not a bad novel but I'm more displeased with the fact that it's got the word necromancer in the title but it's had nothing to do with minions or rasing anything to do his bidding and I'm at chapter 110. plus the book goes premium at around chapter 45 honestly a waste of a read from my point of view but the story's not bad if you like this kind of novel that is.