After undergoing a traumatic experience set up by her stepsister, Xiao Yunhua ended her life at the tender age of eighteen. Instead of going on to the afterlife or the cycle of reincarnation, she found herself forced to bound to a goddess system.
For the condition of going to different worlds and stealing the hearts of different 'targets', Xiao Yunhua was promised unparalleled beauty and talent.
But the further she went, the more that she realized there was a sinister ploy at play.
The system that was meant for making her feel and be more beautiful... was all a game of manipulation?
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STARTS OFF VERY DARK (check the rating), BUT TIES BACK TO THE END OF THE BOOK. Actual book starts on about chapter 18 when things begin to progress, so before then, please be patient.
There is also a review posted by the author that clarifies some things (contains SPOILERS). This book is technically a quick transmigration book, although each arc (volume) is really long.
This is NOT a harem in any way. There is a ML. Just be patient, surprisingly...I know what I'm doing and it'll tie together lol
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goodness scarlet ! your story is so captivating … I'm in total awe <3
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If you read my review you will know that i am truly unbelievably hooked with this story. The plot is perfect, the writing is smooth, story development yeah well it will be a bomb. The characters are also good. our heroine is not a doormat, she's brave, she's genius (this is very important to me). Her story is not always smooth, she has ups and downs. Up until now, I still haven't decided whom I ship yeah it's very valuable thing lol
Recommend!!!!!
Sincerely, an avid reader from your wattpad stories...
Mortem.
Total rating: [3.8 stars]
Writing Quality: [4 stars]
-Was a bit harsher on this section because you said that the beginning chapters were “edited”, so therefore, I had higher expectations.
-Despite being edited, there are still dialogue tag mistakes. (e.g. “It depends on how powerful the target is." Xiao Taotao said. "The higher the…” should be "It depends on how powerful the target is," Xiao Taotao said, "The higher the…” notice the commas?)
-There are also little mistakes with more comma placement and sentence flow (right in the first chapter, in case you didn’t know). This makes the writing style somewhat chunky and not as smooth to read. Also, there are parts where the characters are asking a question, but it’s not a question mark?? Tbh it made me doubt that the chapters you labeled as “edited” are edited at all…
-Problems with adverbs placed in awkward locations too.
-Some problems with tenses. As I can see, the majority of your story is in past tense, but there are occasionally a few phrases in present tense that you should work to avoid. It’s best to keep the story in one tense or the other.
-A few run on sentences…
-TL;DR: Pretty good for Webnovel standards, but there are still mistakes in the edited chapters.
Stability of Updates: [5 stars]
Pretty good and stable!
Story Development: [4 stars]
-Feels really similar to the manhua, “Goddess Creation System” in a lot of aspects. (e.g. “pretty points”, the fact that the more powerful the target is, the person gets more points…)
-Info dumps whenever there’s a main mission could be incorporated in a smoother manner. Was quite bored when the first one came up. Pretty much skimmed through it and just saw a bunch of Zhou’s.
-Flow of the story is pretty good though in general. Pacing is pretty smooth and doesn’t feel like dragging too much!
-However, at around where I stopped reading (Chapter 34), it was because I got bored and kinda stopped. This part might be biased or something, but I liked it better before the romance really kicked in lmao.
-Also highkey guessing the big boss final character is the creator.
-TL;DR: Okay pacing, but also, not the most original idea to ever exist.
Character Design: [3 stars]
-I... don't know how I feel about Yunhua?? LMAO I honestly don't know. Maybe it's because I'm never a fan of systems because they overpower the FL too much, and even though I know that the entire point of the thing is to let Yunhua become "perfect" because it's a "Goddess System" for a reason, but at the same time, I also think that it's difficult to make her a well-balanced character. She's not too perfect, but I can barely spot any flaws in her character. Maybe just give me like a week to carefully analyze every single action Yunhua did in the story and I'll be able to figure something out, but just from reading through this story, all I'm really getting is that she has nice morals?? idk tbh.
-Zhou Feng is kinda flat. Never really felt anything for his personality. I know that you're likely doing a spin on the "cold male lead" trope, but I'm not really seeing where the spin is coming in yet.
-Zhao Meiliang seems to be kinda b*tchy for no reasons either. I’m getting pretty sick of evil female antagonists existing for the sole sake of being evil. I get that Meiliang is tired of her mother comparing her to Yunhua, but how shallow and spoiled is this character to be this way if it’s just because of that that Meiliang wants to ruin Yunhua’s future?? And Yunhua acts like she’s all smart and stuff, but she’s kinda dense to not notice what kind of person Meiliang is since she’s constantly quoting these “novels” that she read and stuff.
-Also, real funny how after Zhao Meiliang exists the storyline, two other evil female antagonists from the Zhou family appear.
-Points to Ni Ming for being a fairly young female character that's not an antagonist.
-Grandmother died, but I never really felt anything for her death... but that's probably b/c I don't get emotional easily so I didn't take any points off for that. I think you did a good job describing Yunhua's emotions during the scene though-- it's probably because I don't really know how to place myself in Yunhua's shoes because again... I find it difficult to understand her character that made me kinda just read through that chapter with a flat face.
-TL;DR: Would like to see more character development, flaws, and dynamics.
World Background: [3 stars]
-There's not much revealed about the world, but it seems like a typical novel setting, so I just gave an average three star rating.
-Have no thoughts about the system because it seemed pretty genius when I was reading the Goddess Creation System manhua but now, reading this one where it's pretty similar, it didn't seem really new or anything to me.
Overall, I do think that most Webnovel readers would like it, but I think it's just a no for me. Maybe I'll pick it up again if I have time, but it isn't binge reading material for me, if that makes sense?
This is a very interesting story, quite unique for a system novel and I know that the author doesn't edit her chapters but she has an editor that will take care of the typos and mistakes in the future.
I don't like emotional MC but I can see that the mc will keep growing each passing days or arcs lol because the character development is great. The MC isn't OP or smart af, she can be immature and dumb, and that's pretty realistic... And since it's realistic, she will grow more mature and get more strength. In one way or another.
Anyhow, I really like the story a lot and I hope people will give it a chance.
Let me start off with the quick transmigration genre as a whole; all of them has systems (points, rewards, shop, stats, etc.), good-looking exceptional targets, a smart lead, missions, MC in original world is abused or overpowered, and obviously, different plots each world. Here’s the thing, it’s really hard to justify the word DIFFERENT because this exist in a genre where the premises are practically the same and you have to play with the rules of the genre just like how you can’t have one love interest then call it a one-of-a-kind-harem. Well technically speaking, each book is indeed different to any other books one way or another. Here’s the review (finally): in all of those premises I’ve mentioned, the author really tried to make it different than all the other QT novels, and trust me, I don’t feel any deja vu (the “I think I’ve read this somewhere before”) while reading this.
1. First, the system. You know how systems usually have 30% screen time? In here it’s about 5-10% on average. System does not just spoil FL with EVERY SINGLE detail. Most MCs usually use the PLOT as their cheat but since the system prevented our own FL, she gets to make her own coincidences.
2. No (or almost none) plot armor. There are no easy successes. No overnight magical victories. The FL fails and even she herself experience heartbreaks. She schemes, yes, but does not always succeed and takes time to execute; and those targets (so far) are all logical thinkers and don’t just randomly fall for her or mindlessly pursue her in the name of love losing their character in the process.
3. The FL’s emotions are very realistic and relatable. Most transmigrators usually are heartless and cold, and have very high IQ where they see the world just objectively. Our FL here is not that kind of person [maybe yet]. She’s guarded yet still vulnerable. She feels really human to me (Am I making sense?) and she’s just the right amount of intelligence and maturity where she still has space to grow and learn. JUST GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!
4. Lastly, I have implied this throughout my comment: I think although this is a QT novel, the transmigration vibe is not really strong. Which I believe is a good thing. The FL is truly living her life there like a resident and treats people as REAL CONSCIOUS PEOPLE, unlike most QT where the other characters are, well, characters in a story with predetermined sets of actions.
**. There ought to be similar stories out there but our author here is truly one of a kind. Her writing is on point and the characters are just sooo alive.