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So many grammar mistakes. The story itself is good but the writing takes all the positives away from it. Definitely try to cure this. Other than that the story and characters are good and I like the development. I still enjoy reading this a lot.

What is this **** ? Another garbage novel with literaly garbage story , garbage translation to , garbage, garbage, garbage , garbage, garbage, garbage

Dude please keep on writing this book it is getting really good

Well I like the story it just that there were many errors on translation department. Well I also don't understand the system functions. Oh and also the evolution path of the beast

I don't know why people hate it that much. I think this book is an enjoyable read and I would vote with about 4 stars (I just gave 5 to even out the hate reviews)

first of all im just a casual reader so i'll just tell my current honest opinion of the book, it is quite good, 10 chapters in and im already quite interested, but that's all the story isn't that outstanding... yet.....maybe i don't know like i said it's still 10 chapters in. For a review i guess the story is quite generic, the usual perverted enemy, the usual lucky op mc just like many other books out there but i feel like this book can do more on the story and character building side which i hope will improve as more chapters are made but if its just the same generic stuff then ill be dropping this book but for now best of luck to the author and the story.

It's really an amazing story with an unique style of writing. It's really interesting. Sorry I couldn't read much but I will read it once you finished writing. I am inspired by your work! Kept it up dear author! Best of luck!

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