Together Forever

I started liking the book, but the audacity of the ml, always grinning and having his way is upsetting to say the least. The way you also portrayed the fl as weak is so annoying.

I started reading this two days before this review and let me tell you, ive binged all 288 chapters currently released. This novel is so far my favorite Novel on this entire platform. The brilliance of the Background, character development, and overall the writing in general, speaks leaps and bounds of wgat separates this masterpiece from the abundance of writing on this site. There are no info dumps and the characters pasts as well as the worlds past, come gradually and are expertly implemented inti the story in an ebtertaining and shockingly perfect way. Also may i commend the author for writing the mc so well. You by far made the correct choice in making the mc so edgy, it solidifies the uniqueness and masterful complexity of the novel. The plot twists constantly keep me on the edge of my seat and reading for hours. The chapter length is perfectly sized to not be too long nor too short, but right in the sweet spot. I am personally very excited to see what you will do with Hanah’s charcter. I could go on and on about how perfect this novel is but i will never explain it good enough to do it justice, just know that you should read this. You will not regret reading this absolute masterpiece, but keep in mind it takes time for the development of everything, but you will see how that only makes it even more perfect.

Pretty clear this novel is only high starred because of the spam 5 star reviews by Gregorio, Death Gun and Dark Clown Terror. Hundreds of them to artificially raise this badly written novels visibility. Using Bots to draw people in is cheap author. learn English better instead so your novel is legible.

First the were 60 chapters it was awesome then decreased to 5books with 40 chapters we tolerated and continued to critique and read our hearts out then decreased to 4 books with 40 chapters we continued to read but now you've done it not only did u release one book that looks boring.Do u want to incur the wrath of readers?

It's a damn shame the novel got dropped. One of my favorites that I've been following for quite a while. I'm not understanding why it was dropped though. It was fairly popular and had very few filler chapters and didn't dwell on the unimportant things. It had just enough explanation of his training while not going to in depth. If I had any complaints it woulda been that the women would come outta left field with their feelings for him but at least they had their own personalities.... DAMN SHAME!!!

The work needs to be proofread. It's readable but there's a lot of run on sentences. Also some thoughts needs to be organised. Simple errors can be avoided and I understand that english is not the first language of the author. This work needs polishing and I hope it can shine brighter in the future.

I promise you, you will not regret reading this or the prequel. This author is amazing!!! The story telling really reels you. I am about to go add another book and get started. Thanks author!!

"Yeah, Jay. You already warned us about it and we'll take care of ourselves. You guys train as well." I replied to Jay.