Thousand Facets -1. The Incarnation

I really enjoyed this work, the build up to the action and the aftermath followed by the transition of story arcs is well done. Thank you for the journey.

What I hate the most is the dense mc...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

ممتاز وممتع وشيق وكل احدثه مبتكرة وطريقتة شيقة واسلوبه جديد اتمني يبقي في جزء ثاني عاشان اشتمتع بيه شكرا جدااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااا للمولف

I like the premise but you dragged out the build up to the party fro way too long. It shouldn't take 20 chapters to finally get to the party. The awakening was dragged out way too long, and every once an in a while you go on a tangent about his past thats not needed.

so he got transmigrated, found his job too hard, didn't bother to learn and manage it, pushed responsibility to his father then kept collecting the money, now he's slacking off in vr. there's harem tag too? I can already imagine the kind mc this is

Right, so this is a great story, with long chapters, and plenty of character development, world development, a lot of interesting plot, good character design, and the thing is actually readable. Oh, and there are a few really hatable characters in the book too. You know, the kind where you with you could break into that world and find and punch said people. Anyway, you should probably read this.

Hearing the abrupt question ma hong jun was at a lost before he answered stupidly and the other that was on their own way stopped and looked back "because l was once baten by him for trying to steal his vegetable and fruit before l joined shrek, and he was also one of the reason why l aggred to join shrek, and when teacher brought me to shrek we meet once again but at that time he was leaving the shrek"

Walking back to the main building Maria wondered about the funeral. Empty coffin. She had wanted to see him one last time, but he was too badly burned for that. 'I wouldn't want to see you like that. Not you, my Ulf.'