The strongest duo

I've been looking for a good apocalypse novel since I read god and devil's world (it sucks) and this is what I vê been waiting for. A good plus is the VR part which is also awesome. Amazing novel, really worth your time.

All I want to say is that you have a good And wide amagination but somehow you are locking of your phrases, wrong grammar. Although I am not good at it, but I know when I see one.So have some review before releasing it...

It's definitely one of the best on this website with entertainment genre.There are a few errors like "......" when talking.Author should try to stay away from cliche moments so far, there are few but if the author adds more in the future, it might ruin the story.Please don't drop it.

So far so good. It got potential. Waiting for more.

suddenly

The village elder felt extremely uneasy. He voiced his deepest fear that maybe the creature caught wind of their bait and switch idea. Many of the villages agreed as well with what the elder was thinking, however the two hunter believed otherwise. They knew even if the creatures knew of their plan, they would still come back eventually. Trickster demons consider themselves as superior and cunning beings. They would always find a way to get what they want.

Lisa:shut up!

The Spider just kinda stares at me before Snuggling its body into where my shoulder was.