A fun-filled novel. The MC's interaction with the system really amused me. Ant killing part, the gorilla chasing part, and all of those comedic parts are awesome. Keep up with your good work, author.
There were some capitalization errors and punctuation errors but other than that it was nice to read. The system having an attitude issue is also funny and refreshing to see. Also I think a lot of authors here can relate to the beginning
I read until chapter 119, and I can't help but give a 5 star review. while I don't cry a lot, the author knows exactly what it feels like to be a broken person. I know you can do everything you want with your story, but Please make it a not so sad end for the protagonist. You know exactly what I mean, even if real life isn't that great, dreaming about a happy alternative should still be allowed. Thank you for showing what it is like to be unable to connect with others on an emotional level.
Interesting but slow paced. I am waiting for the rest of the story to unfold. There are things that are puzzling especially in Emma's case. One may question how and why her story began on hear deathbed. Over all, im glued!
more years pass I'm now almost 20 and Rob is still at my side some days I still can't believe how lucky I am to have him. my parents love Rob and because we've been together so long my dad is building us a house on the back of the property. so we're soon going to be neighbour's with Mum and Dad instead of living with them I think part of it is because they can't take all the lovey dovey sappiness. dad has made one stipulation when we move into the house we have to get married but I don't mind I love Rob so much I'm jumping at the chance to marry him
The next morning in the hospital Lin Dong woke up, he still had perspiration all over his body and he jerked out of bed as if he was ready for a fight.
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