The immortals Ying's and Yang's journey

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Story is quite thrilling in a sense of swashbuckling, sea-faring, mischievous adventure. Not my kind of thing but is definitely intriguing that could catch any kind of reader. Everything is in order, depth and words used are appropriate for each scenario that plays out. Although sometimes there are little mistakes hardly seen but I don’t need to nitpick too much. Oh and the protagonist ‘Antonio’ suddenly changed his name along the first chapter to ‘Antonius’. I’m only pointing this out. Anyways would recommend to any reader with a thirst for adventure. Hope you’ll keep writing. Best wishes to you author.

Really good VRMMO novel. The mc is a ranger/hunter who tame beasts and helping people complete quests  (TAMING IS THE BEST THING OF HUMANITY).This story don't have big scenario and plot. Just a fun and chill story.

me encanta es satisfactoria la historia como en el arco de la mama que sufria trata de personas al final volvio con sus hijas y mc me encantó la comedia y la personalidad de MC adoro al que subió  esta bovela porque yo la queria leer en español y no me dejava en su pagina pero esta esta mas avanzada y puedo traducirla a español (soy mala en ingles la tradusco con chome)

As I read this story, it really touched me. The author has used such beautiful poetic imagery that cannot be described. I must say that the author is putting a lot of effort into this work which can be seen through the thorough research work carried out to give us some phenomenal material to read.This story is excellent, and I can only see it grow further and blossom into a truly marvellous story of the sci-fi genre.

Hmm, the writing could be better and the characters lack in depth characterization. The pacing is fast, and the MC is rather evil. Ignoring my personal opinion on MC, my issue is the psychology state of the villain. Someone that broken would not be able to safely transition to another world and accept a new family, because they are incapable of trust. A more logical conclusion would have been killing his new family. My suggestion is ground your character more, this will make them more realistic and more terrifying.

"Colonel Frasier is organizing the establishment of treatment centers in the outer wards," Euphie explained to Kaguya. "We intend to use the hospitals that are still intact and would welcome your family's input on which buildings are still structurally sound and what services are most urgently needed outside the Concession."

'Mister Dongfang won't be in so much pain then.'