Translation issues aside (yuan dollars, jin kilograms), this novel is plain boring.Writing quality: the novel is plagued with inconsistency: shark smell blood but then abandons pursuit when it lost sight of MC. It is also very hard to read due to translation of currencies issues leading to fishes costing millions of dollars ... Story Development: the only thing to look forward to is MC getting stronger, there is no plot, no foreshadowing, we don't know how different the world is.Character Design: There is only MC and MC has no design. Oh and every one is a millionnaire but MC is both a millionaire and poor.Updating: not an issue given I'm dropping this in less than 10 chaptersWorld background: I think the author doesn't know either
Fairly good. Might be shaping into a harem but I'll have to wait and see. There are some cliche bits but not too bad. The MC seems to have more depth to them than typical WebNovel standards.All in all I think this is worth a read to see if it fits your tastes. I'm planning to add it to my collection and will only drop it if it turns for the worse.
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"Collin! What happened, Is something urgent? Are you alright!" Austin steadied the young man with gentleness and his eyes were filled with concerns. Collins was fully ragged and the smell of the saltwater from the ocean stuck Austin's nostrils when he drew close to the young man. Austin's eyebrows arched when he studied him, 'Did something terrible occurred when I am not here!'
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