The World Of The Myriad Races

So far, I’m loving and enjoying the story. First of all, the MC is OP and is portrayed as a cold king. He truly acts like a real king, which I really appreciate. He doesn’t rush into things and always acts smart.One small point of critique I have is about the visualization. What I mean is that there could be more detailed descriptions of characters or scenes to create a stronger impact (just my opinion and personal taste).The writing style is great.Thank you for this amazing novel, and GigglyCat, keep up the fantastic work! I’m eagerly waiting for the next chapters and am excited to see how the story unfolds! 👍

I love the story and the lore it’s building up the progress so far is nice with the mc becoming a god but the grammar is shit, it’s good for the couple chapter but then it start off with the mixing up of the church names making me confused and then I just read a chapter where their was no space every dialogue was jumbled into a paragraph . I’m trying to continue but plz fix these ecen if you have to use Ai to correct ur writing. This makes me feel like your tranlating a novel but messing up with simple mistakes