A great novel that was given up on too early. It seemed like the author listened to readers comments a bit too much and went back and rewrote chapters which changed future paths he had already visualized. While it's good to learn from mistakes and try to make fans happy, don't ever let them change your novel midway through. This will change the way the author writes the rest of the novel even if it's subconsciously, which in this case seemed to wilt his enthusiasm for this one, which ended up causing it to get dropped suddenly. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy White Online, but my personal opinion and a few of my buddies who've read both agree that Martial Arts Master was overall a better read and had even greater potential if it wasn't dropped. I hope that someday in the future the author either continues on, or rewrites the novel and does what he imagines without other's changing his views. Either way, I'm enjoying the reread I'm doing.
A very slow novel, it's not recommended for people who don't like to read slow novels. I never give novels higher than a 4* or 4.5*, since novels have mistakes here and there. I'll continue to read to see how the characters and world background grow and whatnot. Keep up the good work Author!
Ok first off, I’m really enjoying this. I’ve always enjoyed stories centred around shops and their op managers. Now onto my only complaint. Are you ready? Ok. Why did you have to end it when I just here wanting more!
An excellent and epic story so far, it's coming along very nicely. I truly love it a lot. Randidly Ghost-hound is a brilliant made main character, his outlook is very interesting, I like him a lot. I hope to see more of this amazing story soon.
Warning: Story has a long filler or something starting chapter 238. I don’t know at what chapter the story goes back to the main storyline- I am wary of putting more money into it to find out. I read ten chapters of filler and stopped. Review for the main storyline: It is written at a cut above the standard LN we see here. The cliches are done in a different enough way to be interesting. The main aspect of this story is the near irredeemable MC (The author gives fair warning what the reader is walking into). The MC shows reactions that are totally different than the cliche isekai MCs usually in these stories- some of his reactions are very understandable. But most of the time you want the mc to receive a beating. Regardless the situation the mc gets transmigrated into is complex and makes one want to find out more. I enjoyed it but this is definitely a story where your mileage may vary in how much you can tolerate the MC.
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