This is my first time actually writing a fiction so please don't be too brutal (: That being said tell me what I could do better your feedback will be greatly appreciated. Also, I feel it necessary to mention English is my first language I just don't have the best grammar, sorry.
Dan Carth is not a bad person. so why was he summoned to hell? WHY WAS I SUMMONED TO HELL! well, maybe this isn't hell. The closest thing I could imagine though. Join Dan Carth a summoned Hero who's patron country was destroyed as he got there. He is then subjected to extremely brutal treatment by the conquering nation. Will he survive? will he make it back to his family? is there even a reason to continue living? find out by reading The Tortured Hero. Warning: Tagged 18+ for language, Intense violence and gore (descriptive descriptions of torture gore and general violent actions), Also nothing planned yet but possible sexual scenes (nothing to descriptive just felt the need to put this warning here)
