The Thirteen Objects Of End

A tall, lanky man who was clad in a dark hoodie and a baseball cap stood in wait at an inconspicuous corner near the towering Lé Amoúr Suites and Restaurant. He held a long range DSLR camera in his arm and seemed as if he was waiting for someone to arrive.

Saya thought about what the woman said. "So it's a matter of being patient and letting the profits grow over time like in the stock market…I understand, I never thought about it that way."

And all that glitters is gold

When I flying, the views of houses and buildings are clearly visible from here.

Beautiful work by the author, the description allows you to picture everything in your mind like a film. A lot of characters are always good, everyone would have at least one favourite.Me personally I feel like I relate to Connie the most, no spoilers but...You gotta do what you gotta do, even pickpocketing.

Love the story!! Can’t wait to read more!!

Found your link on Twitter since and since I like to check out new material for my YouTube channel that I am working on, I wanted to check this out.Not too bad so far man, just keep things slow and steady.  I cant express to you how mad it makes me when someone is writing a great story, then BOOM they get impatient with the pacing and make their MC go from weak to extremely OP.  PLEASE do NOT do that, and I think you will have a great piece of literature on your hands.  Best of luck, ill be keeping tabs on this!