The Theory of Science

Let's get the big one out of the way first, the grammar is not the best. You are a new writer and English isn't your first language so you cant be blamed. The story and its characters are interesting and you are good at world-building, keep up the good work :)

Clarence looks at the side of the lamp and sees a button. The moment he pressed it, the lamp lit up. The light wraps around the room until Clarence decided to turn it off.

The ethereal grail started fading more and more during the chant, being slowly absorbed into Tyler, until it was no longer visible. Suddenly, Tyler(in the body of the leader avatar) opened his eyes. The rinnesharingan on his forehead had changed. All the green tomoe had overlapped with golden orange stars. The rinnegan in the palms of his hands had also changed. The middle pupil had taken on the shape of a star, and it's original purple color had turned golden. He could also feel an increase in his strength as well as the growth of some plant like roots near his energy center that connected to his soul. If he had to guess, he likely got magic circuits after fusing with the Star Grail. Before he could marvel at his changes any further, the world started rumbling and shaking, thunder clouds appeared out of nowhere and a gigantic pressure was exerted on the moon they were on.

"Would you happen to have a name, honey?" I asked, adding the cute nickname to ease him a bit. He held his breath after I called him 'honey' and I heard Thorn growl so softly it was barely audible. The man continued to stare at me for a few moments and nodded shortly after,

"I wish if we can have a proper farewell programme before you leave. But time and environment doesn't permit us. I have been wanting to tell you all these feelings which I have been bearing in my heart. But I have no confidence and I have no right to have either. I know that a person like me is not even fit to be your friend so it's impossible for me to woo you. I enjoy your friendship and I fear to lose your friendship. Because of all these, I have been hiding all these burdens secretly. I can no longer hide it anymore and life without telling you all these will be impossible. How long can I hide a burning coal under a blanket. If I do, the burning coal will burn up the blanket. This secret love (the burning coal of my heart) burns down the blanket of my heart and I can't hide it any longer. I know that you may be shocked or angry. But please don't for the sake of our friendship. I hope you will understand me. Will you please understand my love? " Then she replied, " Why do you tell me all these. ......."and the line was cut off. I tried again and again but the only response I got was, "The number you are calling is currently switched off please call later.".....

PaGo said " What can I say I believe in God nad also read quite lot of manga. So, why did you pull me from my world. Did do something wrong." God "No. You did nothing wrong. I was just wondering what to do and I saw you being happy no matter what situation you were so I decided to send you to another world with two abilities of different anime world and with a stat window." PaGo thought to himself ' Ok what should I choose?'

Absolute perfection, this has great potential to be a great. looking forward to reading more of this novel. Good job author, you're making masterpiece