"I didn't cross the line, you did. I told you not to." He whispered slowly as his eyes travelled from my eyes to my lips. The more he got closer the more my heart began beating even faster. The hand that was holding my hand relaxed, his fingers intertwined and clasped between my fingers. I don't know why but I closed my eyes. In a matter of time, I could feel his lips on mine. He was kissing me like never before. This time it was gentle and passionate. I don't know what came over me but I didn't stop him. All I could hear was my own beating heart galloping to the core. We eventually both fell on the bed. That didn't stop him, but that did get me back to my senses.
the book is alright the story so far is nice but the fight scene are bad and I mean bad . it like the writer forgets the stuff he mentions in the previous chapters. and most stuff that feels important and brushed of and mentioned so little
hey guys, I love my book, 'cause yeah, even I read it from top to bottom and still hoping to keep on writing while trying to balance school and my other book you know.anyways, my purpose for writing this review is to tell you guys to give it a chance and try it. trust me, if you believe the first five chapters is whack, then you may drop it. but if it's good then comment, review, and power stone this book. though, I'd prefer golden ticket.nice reading!!
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