The Saiyan Immortal

a great novel overall, engaging story enough realisem and great mc.

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Honestly this novel has a lot of potential, it could be up there in the future with author's pov, But as of now it could get a lot better. Author you should put more weight into your story, for example we never knew how many students are actually attending the academy or how many teachers are teaching what subjects and how the educational system actually works, and for being called the 'best' academy it's a little bit weird how a mere C-rank could become a teacher, considering that they are teaching nobility, you know like... Noble households that are probably filled with S or SS rank members. You could also expand the main cast, I think 3-5 characters is a little bit on the small side but it wouldn't an issue if they get enough character development

Fun and different,  please update,  cover and title makes you think venom from spiderman fanfic, it's not,  please update 😭 your other book is fun also, but I think i'm more into this one...

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Interesting & hilarious story that won't disappoint u. In fact, read it! I hope they're not going end the story short disappointly...                                                                                             

It's the uterus's mouth

(Ella's point of view)