Well The Writing Quality Is Good, There Is Room For Story Development.Author can Try To liven Up Characters By Emphasizing More On Emotional Aspect as well as their featured.The Most Promising Thing, Is World Background. Which Author Can Further Improvised To Inter-Galatic Wars or more As Author may see fit, As There will be different species in future author can I have our MC s*x With Inter-species.Well Author May Need To First As Public Opinion As There May Not Be Many People Who are Interested In Such Kinky Stuff...Well Last But Not Least It Has Room For Growth But The Book Has Not Been Updated For Probably 5 Months So I Gave 1 Star If Possible I won't give a starI ain't Stingy, But Yeah If You Dropped This Please Mentioned It So Others May Not Get Their Hopes Irked Upon This Story .I Will Change This Review After Author Has Upoladed Enough Chapters For Further Assessment Thank You ❤️
Actually a pretty solid novel. Synopsis seems cringe, but I recommend reading it. Reminds me a bit of LOTM, and there are no real cliche tropes so far. The POV switch is a little jagged sometimes, but this sis till better then 99% of the stuff on this platform.
Great novel! I normally don't like sci-fi stuff but this was written really well. I love the story development and the description. Would definitely recommend to others.
Good, but expecting more, I think author should release 2 chapter per day, very interesting story all the best, bring more character so that the story is interesting, tell about farzana allahamahut alban, so it will be more interesting
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