The Race I Belong

10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start is a story about a senior brother with a system, and a junior sister who went back in time after dying.I have to admit, I really enjoyed this novel at the start. It was a interesting slice of life romance novel, however the story quickly went awry from there.First off, the translation quality is quite poor. The first letter of many sentences are cut off, and sometimes words are entirely. There are countless mistakes throughout, but at the very least it's readable and isn't MTL. (3/5 stars)The story development isn't that great. As previously mentioned, the story is about a senior brother with a system, and a junior sister who regressed. The senior brother's (Jiang Ming) system, allows him to gain various rewards for doing "ordinary" things. The start of the novel is pretty good, it reads like a cultivation slice of life novel with a slow romance. This rapidly changes. The main character constantly kills people in the dark for his junior sister. (After she somehow offends someone or gets too powerful) This, in turn, causes even more people to attack the main character. I am not even joking, but it even causes a war. It's downright silly. At this point, it's devolved into a story about a overpowered Xianxia character fighting anything that moves. Not to mention, the pacing is tremendously awful. Story goes from cute slice of life romance novel to world war 3 in less than 100 chapters, and they are already introducing different worlds. There are also a few plot holes in the novel. For example, the main character obtains a "technique" that allows him to see people's information, and some secrets as well, as long as he knows their name. So, you would expect him to figure out that his junior sister has time traveled, however as of chapter 149, this hasn't happened. (2/5 stars)Moving onto the character design. Main character still feels like a blank canvas to me personally. He hasn't changed from the beginning. He is exceedingly generic, to the point I can't pinpoint any unique personality traits. The junior is sister is generic as well, the only personality trait she has is that she is protective of her senior brother. As for the romance? I'm not sure. They randomly went from a pseudo-sibling relationship, to a romantic/sexual one, and I have zero idea what the turning point was. Most characters are rather one dimensional, but at least this novel has more variety than other cultivation novels. (2/5 stars)World background is below average. World feels exceedingly small when only a few regions are vaguely described. I feel like the universe is more talked about than the planet the main character is on, which is rather weird. (2/5 stars)Overall, novel isn't paced well, and the author seemingly went from slice-of-life to action novel, and it's very obvious when you read the novel. Everything regarding the novel is rather sub-par, more effort was needed in all aspects.I think this novel would've been way better if the author simply kept it as a slice-of-life novel and focused on the romance and world-building, but that's just my opinion.

the whole book should be here , very disappointing for the fans. why keep us waiting

The writing style of the author is impersonal. It doesn’t let me immerse myself in the world and it feels like I’m just reading a documentary.The author is also very insistent on shoving information at you over and over again.C+ soul, increasing difficulty, feels bad but I’m calm, 800 something people died before me... Yeah, yeah. As if you haven’t written that for 5 times already.It’s not worth reading and this goes to show how Webnovel is choosing books that are deteriorating in quality

This story blew up my mind.  I never thought of a vampire genre story this way. I hope i can see more of this masterpiece.  Keep up the good work.

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hmmmmmmh i like the start and hope u don't drop this althought u started it just for the competetion . Ahem lemme give you a tip *Cough* do a massive release  *Cough* to get poppular  *Cough*  it will help you early  *Cough*  *Cough* i am not beaing selfish not at all  *Cough* x) . Jokes aside well done and continue pls :p

Oh my gosh, I dont normally read Sci-fi's but I'll make an exception for this one, you've got ways to go and improvement is around the corner. Each chapter looked interesting! I am amused. Keep updating author~~

After reading the book I just couldn't help but write a review. Author, this book is AMAZING. I can't express how much I enjoy it. From characterization to the story line, you have done amazing on the story. And to top it all off, chapters 205-208 are amazing, I cried, and I do mean I CRIED. I truly hope that you will continue this book until it has passed 1,000 chapters