The Queen's Mate

5/5Wow, a work that displays the author's imagination （三ФÅФ三）I think that this book is descriptive enough that you can imagine the scenes (●ↀωↀ●)Good job, please continue this! (=^-ω-^=)

I'd rate my work 5 star so bleh.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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The bitch finally sit down.

Rukia was catching up on some Errands that were sorley needed. Her life was going pretty much back to normal now that she was back but she sensed that the threat might still be out there. Rhe only thing keeping her mind off that was the work on finishing reconstruction of Soul Society.

"Well, how was your weekend?" He seems so complacent. I pull Landon by the arm. "Good, see you!" I shout nervously. Hardin just laughs. Landon looks at me questioningly. "What was that?" Obviously he means my strange behaviour. "Nothing, I just do not like Hardin." "At least you do not have to see him often." But there is something else in his tone. What exactly does he mean by that? Does he know about the kiss?

"I had used Fidelius Charm to hide your location from the ministry of magic as well Dumbledore," Harold said.

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<p>As of now, a group of the Celestial Sword sect entered the unnamed village number 10, located in the hot southern region of the Qin Empire, shocking the ignorant and gullible villagers, who felt as though a deity had come to their humble village.</p>

Harry Potter

Never!               Never! Never!

The concept is good. The story is simple and straightforward almost like a children’s fairytale. Now for the not so good bit:The MC has the IQ of a doorknob and constantly whines besides getting everything anyone could ever wish for in the given setting. This bit gets repetitive and way too annoying. Most of the MC’s vocabulary consists of the phrase “huh?!”. The fights are ridiculous. A dozen apprentice level kids holding off a demon army while most of them are in a one on one situation while the mc ponders over moves and goes “huh?!” every time he sees anthing move.The grammar is atrocious. This needs an editor.