Loved the concept of this book , at first someone maybe thought that it was just a love story but after reading it anymore cam feel the Depth of Diya & Rajveer's relationship & their support for each other & how the characters were developed
Writing Quality is standard, which sadly most novels fail to reach, with minor mistakes that the author seems to eventually fix/will eventually fix.Can't complain about the stability of updates, with chapters coming out quick and consistently.The story is developing well, it's not as slow as I was dreading but it's not fast either. Good pacing.Character Design is alright, minor issue of the character feeling shallow although I can't precisely pinpoint why that is. Perhaps it's because there is not much history known about the character and he doesn't seem wise so far however the novel is still new, got far to go and development could end up being able to compete with the best of them.World Background is mediocre at best, we so far know there are 2 worlds, 2 villages, 2 cities, a random kingdom the MC isn't in, 2 towns and a forest. We know very little about all of it by chapter 119 but as before the novel is still at the start of everything, it can improve.Sorry for the crude review, not experienced in them, just thought I'd give an honest opinion rather than "5 stars great novel".
I like this book very much. But i hope the release rate will be higher. This book is too interesting, i cannot wait. .....,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,.
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