The One That Got Away

Can't wait for the next chapters..

The story line is good. Waiting for more chapters 👍

Nice story. The plot is realistic.

well, its a fantasy world. i think its because of heightened senses they don't suspect him as he is 'blind'. seeing him move around normally and do stuff normally will make them make up there own excuses for him like thinking that he probably trained a lot on his senses to the point he can 'see'. i may be wrong xD

Ngl, but the grandfather final moments were epic af. It was the only thing making me stick to the story until the arc where they start the War with that other World or something

Thanks man 💪

Give it time, literally all your complaints are addressed by like chapter 120, he gets multiple male helpers and there is a lot of character progression. This is not a story where all your character progression is in the first 20 chapters, he continually learns and grows as time and events happen. I am doing a re read and yes, he is a bit annoying in the beginning but this isn't a 100-200 ch story, there is definite progression in the characters and world(s) as you go.

Cuando van a sacar nuevos capítulos?

thanks for the spoiler

the fact that people disliked this is CRAAZY, ungrateful b*st*rds

Please more chapters and please edit your work before posting, I had to pass most errors but I overlooked because the book flowed well.

im sooo loving this..however updates needs to be daily (demanding much..sorry)