The NPC Rebellion: The Game Beyond

Very immersive plot and the Overpowered Main Character is really awesome. So many mystery and good story progression. And I am waiting for the real truth during the war.

This story was off to a decent start, with only a few inconsistencies, but it quickly went downhill from there. The author introduces several new elements to the story, only to suddenly remove them, as if he decided to suddenly change the direction of the story, with so apparent purpose, but the biggest issue I had with the story is the redundant info. In almost every chapter there are one or more entirely redundant paragraphs that either told me absolutely nothing or something that's so obvious a toddler wouldn't need it explained, and as a result I found myself skimming/skipping a lot of the story, and probably missing some of the important stuff. Author should really work on prioritizing what info to keep along instead of padding the story in excess, i.e. a full paragraph of monsters nearing the camp, but MC just had to release his aura so it wasn't a problem anyway. If it wasn't a problem anyway, don't bother telling people about it.

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An absolute brilliant story, the world background is absolutely genius! It's really well written  but I recommend you to have a strong heart... Its not a silly harem story with screaming agape girls 😄.The characters are unique and mesmerizing, it's funny and so sad at the same times. There is a lot of struggles and you will feel hypnotized...One of my favorite story so far! Hope you will vote to get this story reaching the charts, it's truly a hidden masterpiece : a curse.

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The story is similar to pocket hunting dimension with  more shameless mc and slightly different buff he has than phd's mc. But is still a chill read so enjoy it.

A story that is simple yet compelling aboard of your news feeds! Another novel that will surely make your mind dive in it while reading it! You should all check this out, a realistic fiction ahead of you! Great job, author!