that was pretty good. the suspense is killing me. to read what's going to happen next. I hope Angel gets a mate that's pure and simple just like Angel. loved reading this novel. thank you so much, author:)
the only thing I'd like to suggest is maybe if there are only two characters maybe not use their names so often, as long as we know who is talking is what really matters. other than that giving five stars because I enjoyed the story line so far!
Stand user in marvel universe <== This is better than this novel.
But overall both are extremely similar right from the first ch.
I mean, the first ch is same but slightly modified.
The tense slipping made it a bit hard to get into at first, but seem to improve as the story when on. There’s a lot of telling, which if turned into showing would raise the tension for the reader. Overall I enjoyed it and can’t wait to find out what happens.
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But overall both are extremely similar right from the first ch.
I mean, the first ch is same but slightly modified.