i do really like this story. yeah it start'swith a system-but it is quite fun system start,with some gentle and actually fun humour. Story is not bad(hard to say more after mangy 40 chapters),hope it will stay solid. and 1 more important thing-this is not another crappy pet story.
this is a l fan-fic why are the chapters locked. I have never seen a fan-fic where I need to unlock chapters. well it was a good story while it lasted.
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I have finished reading all the free chapters so far. Although I enjoyed this story, I will not buy any more. The story itself is interesting. I just feel it's a bit slow for my taste. 50 chapters in, and not much has happened that has really gotten my attention. I feel that the 50 chapters could have been smashed together to make longer but fewer chapters. The Mc's character is nice and decisive, Side characters haven't really made much of an impact on me so far, and then again, there isn't that many, lol. Another small issue I had was The Mc's Name and alias. Imo his name and alias are just too different for me to enjoy reading both of them in the same paragraph. (Shi Tian and Nathan)It takes my attention out of the story when I read the names so close together, considering it's supposed to be the same person. I would have been fine with something like Lin Tian, but this is just my personal preference. (Doesn't affect the overall enjoyment much)The main reason I won't be continuing this story, as stated before, is the pacing of the story. The 50 free chapters, imo could have been made into 15-20 chapters, maybe less. I just don't see myself spending coins on a novel where the individual chapters give little content and are dragged out. For Example Say The mc goes into a store to buy an item. The next 2-3 chapters are just him in the store when they could have just been made into 1 long chapter instead of 2-3 short ones. (This is just an example and not a scenario in the novel) That being said, similar occurrences have happened. Overall, the story and idea behind it are good and entertaining, but the cost to content ratio isn't for me. I don't want to spend coins on 2-3 chapters when said chapters could have been made into 1. And I understand some scenarios just take time to flesh out, but a couple of things that have happend so far could have been made into fewer chapters instead of being dragged out over more chapters. I just feel I would rather spend my coins somewhere where I would get more content per chapter I buy. That being said,as I am stopping at chapter 50, the later chapters may be different and if someone else has read further than me and knows if the pacing picks up do let me know and maybe I'll consider spending Coins here.
Then she begin to explained with serious face "Well, the key is at the words, you can create any kind, any size, any criteria, any character, any story behind it's creation. did you get it's meaning? it means because this token power is absolute and above me, even if you use this token and write the monster story that completely out of this world boundary and data, the monster and the complete story will still be created perfectly! say, for an example, you write the monster is from another Planet called Ragnarok where the Gravity is 100 times more heavier and the world is so extremely cold 10 degree Near Absolute Zero, the Monster Race called Freezod the Ultimate Ruler of Ragnarok Planet, it's Gender is a Female, it have humanoid body with 18 blue plasma wings, 10 tails, 3 irides/pupils in each eyes and Demon Dragon Eyes in the 3rd eyes and so on so forth. All of those written will be created after you completed the process, then a new monster and planet with it's complete world will be added to the Universe and if you not write any creature beside that monster, then the token will create it based on a little information that has been written by you. So the more complete the story, the more complete and the more closer to your desire the world will be created by the token"
Sofia saying this to his sister because she is gonna late for her new job interview she must need this job because her family condition is not better . her father died 3years ago and his mother is doing a job at Sofia's house as a Servant. but Yegor wanted to help her but she don't want help from her boyfriend because she is an independent girl but she don't that Yegor is the CEO of the company where she is going for a job interview.
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