This is a little different from typical transmigration novels. When we are introduced to MC in the first few chapters, he is already OP with photographic memory, great sword skills and a clear mind skill that allows him to see through others’ muscles, bones and minute movements. He has a bodyguard job that seems a little low level given his prowess. He has encounters with several beautiful women, who are awed by him. Men jealous of him send him challenges to fail miserably. It’s an okay read, but I wanted to see more of MC’s will/ motivation. In essence, I am not convinced by what drives him to do as he does.
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━— The Pumpkinmancer’s Epic — ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━Once upon a time in an MMOA world as beautiful as peaceful People lived, not the least carefulBut, it all changed with his arrival A devil? Harbinger of evil’s revival? No, far worse! The legendary Jack’O! ☠️He came and went as he pleased He was one that none could controlA revenant that one had to appease None could even fathom his goals! ☠️Always coming out of nowhere He rendered so many heroes crazy He was considered a true nightmare He was simply way too OP! ☠️Many searched for a single flawTrying to slay the immortal creatureA quest that was destined for failure We watched this in complete awe ☠️We reveled in the tales of his deedsFor such power, we felt endless greed We aspired to become as carefree This is how the Legion came to be☠️The ones who observed from afar As he caused unbelievable mayhem Brandishing his malevolent grimoire All his enemies, he would overwhelm ☠️He made the entire world trembleHow could one cause such destruction?But then we reached a frightening conclusionWhy did it sometimes seem accidental?! ☠️— Pumpkinmancer, Unknown Bard—
I just think that the kingdom and world background could receive some more attention, like describe more the peculiarities of each area and economic/political importance in each area. As he was an explorer in his previous life and sell information about his discoveries he should know somethings.
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This novel can be summarized in one word: 'boring'. People might think that being a leafling, constantly evolving and slowly getting stronger is fun. Even I thought so at first and I admired the idea and the way the author wrote it, but as it progressed I realized that I didn't enjoy what I was reading at all.To me, this novel is just a copy of slime anime, the reincarnated slime Rimuru, except that Mc goes around training soldiers and playing sergeant. The difference is that he always trains leaflings with low IQ and shares the advantages and knowledge of his system with them. Other than that, it is a similar kingdom building novel.I don't know why it was fun for some people to see him training his little army down to the smallest detail, but for me it was not worth reading. In the same way, it is pointless to try to make another leafling as strong as him in every evolution. These are creatures at the bottom of the power ladder of the world background. You might think that the only advantage of training them would be long term loyalty but that is a big NO. As a former soldier or agent, Mc is too soft on them. In one chapter a leafling was kicking him in the face and he was just indifferent. At least if you are building your own army you have to make them fear and respect for you. It doesn't have to be all of them always like "Yes, Sir!" to you but what's the point if you don't want to keep them under your power and make them follow your orders?To me it was a boring MC. It's too early to talk about world building as the pace of the story is slow. But he and his 'cheat' are completely pointless. If at the end of the story a leafling who starts from the same level as him - from the bottom - will be at the same power level as him and be disrespectful to him, why should I read this sergeant role play novel ?
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