Read up to ch 118. Was readable till then but I really couldn’t Anymore. Save yourself some time and skip this. It is so forced and cliche with zero dimensional characters with typical young master types.
The author has a lot of experiences and it was seen in his novel. The narration was good and proofreading it will make it perfect. The author will still improve in the future. I deeply recommend this book!Good luck author!
Shameless Author review! ;]Here is what you can expect from this book:1. This is not a cultivation world but Earth in the future with apocalypse elements (Not right from the start but from the 2. volume), video game elements, and fantasy elements filled with action, adventure, myths, beasts, creatures and a bit of romance.2. The MC is average but perceptive and a fast learner. He is not menacing nor a loser, but as the story goes on he will slowly learn how to become an antihero.Also, the MC is not a genius, so don't except him know everything! That's where other characters come in!3. This story's first volume is just an appetizer, like a tutorial that shows our MC and the world how things work before throwing them right into the middle of the chaos, which starts at volume 2!4. (Con) At the start the pace may seem fast, not insanely fast, but from chap 40 it slows down, but not too slow. Though, even like that until chap 40, I am sure you will enjoy it just as much as after it! :]5. English is not my first language but I always try to improve so if you see mistakes make sure and feel free to point it out so I can correct them. (Without any toxicity of course.)6. Update is around 1 chap a day, but if I see you kind readers like the story, (Ps or Summoning Pens) I will upload more, around 1-3 chaps, depending on how much support I get and how much time I have on my hands.7. If you are curious about whether this is a harem or not, yes, there will numerous waifus, three to be specific. As for if he ends up with all of them?It will depend on the majority of you. (Though, don't expect 5+ girls drooling after MC, this is not that type of story.)8. I am sure if you give a story a try you won't be disappointed!9.Love you all, peace out!
So far, so good. It´s been more of a slice of life than action but i think it was necessary to build the history, characters and their relationships. I´m very curious about how you will develop their powers because mithology is a bit of vast topic but I think it will be a good and will improve even more your writting skills! Urban novels with superpowers are a bit rare, so maybe that´s the reason that has a bit less feedback!Continue with the good work !
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