The Last Leaf Falls

A very nice book...captivating and intriguing! The author really has his mind on this book, It's a must-read, I assure you.................................

Same author as Castle of Black Iron I believe. He's making the same mistakes yet again. Story barely began and already racism. Plus already started the filler crap. A whole chapter about a freakin bow and what its made out of, a weapon that's gonna become useless after 1 or 2 more cultivation breakthrus. Considering its the beginning of the novel, he's gonna breakthru quickly. Was a whole chapter really necessary for a bow that might be with us for maybe the first 100 chapters?Plus trying to make the MC smart when he's just kissing butt. A little butt kissing and everyone around him falling head over heels for him.Now he's gonna make a gun? Whats the explanation gonna be? A whole chapter on Chinese education system thats so outstanding that they prepared him to make anything anywhere? <- Sarcasm Also: SAY MY NAME!^

This is better then I expected. The only thing I can’t get over is how the Author keeps time skipping and summarizing the situation into a single paragraph. The Author could have easily made us emotionally invested. But instead, too many info jumps! Author needs to learn 'show not tell'.It is uncertain if MC is smart or not. Only time will tell if this is good.But honestly, though I hate to say it, this might be better then EER in terms of plot and organization. Though I think EER is better in terms of beginning. Romance?: I won’t spoil names but I love her. However, I dislike how MC “crush” is mentioned often as it feels forced. A character with no significance in the story and isn't even aware of his existence. Yet MC can’t forget about her all these years. He didn’t even remember her name after a decade, so wtf? It was 'deep love' for just a small crush and you’d think his mindset would change after all these years.It’s to soon to judge as we don’t know what path MC will take once he enters society. Hopefully, it’ll be like One-Punch Man.

+i will do my best to read this since it is so short, but i did read the first few paragraphs, and i do not know if the writer is writing this for a 3 year old child or a 30 year old ivy league adult. he tries to use intellectually large words that do not seem to be within his normal and  domestic vocabulary.... but also realizing it is his first book again i will try and see and either repost or make a new one with more detail.

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

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This book is truly intriguing enough to leave all other novels on standby and read this one only

Yeah the writting quality was not the best,  but I liked it. While it did irritate me how often you messed up the he and her which really is annoying,  but yolo. 20 chapters in and I like it. I recomend you get Grammerly to help.