The Hidden King

It's like a badly written version of RSSG. The MC is supposed to be the battle emperor, but he plays like a total newbie, making bad decisions left and right. The game has also just started, yet theres huge guilds with leatherworkers and blacksmiths somehow supplying their armies with full 'bronze level' armor, allowing them to clear out entire leveling zones? Riiiight... This is something that should happen weeks or months later, not on Day 1.Overall, a terrible read.

Warning: there aren’t much chapters at the moment, so this review may change. If it does, I’ll update it. This novel is extremely worth reading, it’s a thrilling action with a bunch of twists and will keep you on your toes. I don’t want to spoil very much,  so I’ll put a quick summary without spoiling anything. A dude is reincarnated into another world as the overseer, or cult leader. He’s bleased by the 4 “beacons”, and gains a system like book. This book is a really unique take on the genre and worth a shot. Form your own opinions on it, but in my opinion, this book is worth reading.

It's well written, but the MC is an idiot (Mother is lying on the sofa with heavy dark circles under her eyes, sweating with a tired appearance two red snakebite marks on her neck... Thought of MC: "She's tired but okay, I won't bother her."), asking stupid questions of the system (What is a meditation room for?), making stupid mistakes (Without any strength wanting to travel the world through a portal where beasts, monsters and demons live, for the same reasons, leaving the house at night to investigate a figure he saw and going carelessly towards 2 suspicious people arguing in the dark, to make worse 2 powerful people.) and showing a brave and confident front to the point of hitting anyone who offends his store, but then he shakes in fear, freezes and gets beaten by someone who is weaker than him (the fat one had 5 stars, he had 5 fire plus 2 or 3 other elements), the system explains the most obvious things possible, which I would think normal if he explained everything or almost everything, but there are many things that are not explained as to why or how, and the MC just does it as if he already knows but doesn't know why (like the price of the store's servicesor how they work, how the system doesn't take anything from the money that customers pay "it all goes to the MC

Another Review from the Author. This time this is not as shameless as the first one since I will address complaints the readers pointed out. I know everyone wouldn't be pleased by this work of mine, however before going in, please read this first.This novel is written in First Person Perspective and with only one perspective which is the MC's.So everything you will be reading here were all taken from the MC's own eyes. His thoughts, what he experienced, everything. He's the source.I also took it upon myself to write while keeping in mind not to self-project myself in the novel. His thinking will all stem from the 16-year old mind who because of a sudden increase in clarity or intelligence or anything you could call it, tends to overthink most of the time. And well, there's also his adaptability so he won't react as you expected on something where one should start asking questions or be surprised instead he will fall into his overthinking habit.This is where the first complaint will be addressed.'I am weak.' You will be seeing him thinking like this at the earlier parts of the story. He's an overthinker and whenever something happened that's out of his grasp, he will immediately lean on that thought.Of course along the way he will outgrew that thought but yeah, some dropped this before that happened. He started from the bottom and I wanted to show what's going on inside his mind so his mindset at the earlier chapters will stay like that.For the second and third complaints, the Harem and the Side-characters . This is clearly tagged as a harem novel so expect the harem members will be introduced.'They were introduced but there's no substance in them. What are they thinking? Why did they do that? Why did they fall for him? etc.'As this is a FPP novel, of course, you wouldn't be privy to what the other characters in the novel are thinking most of the time. That's unless they pointed it out or explained it themselves. Though they're introduced, the times they interact with the MC were all situational and most of the time their real thoughts were still not showing on the surface. They're all moving and thinking by themselves in the background even without the MC looking at them, so the next time they will show up in his perspective, bits of pieces of what they're thinking and their personality will be exposed.I used this kind of writing on my first novel as well, slowly unraveling the personalities of the characters introduced. But since some of the characters will be left behind on their worlds and it's still unsure when they will show up again, they will feel flat.I understand that point but that's just how it is. Characters will not immediately open up to him but as their interaction with each other increased, you'll see the sides of them that's not shown during the first time they were introduced.'Not detailed enough. The description is too bland.'As this is something even I am not confident at. You will feel that his environment were not described properly. I suck at describing things and people but I'm trying to improve it through continuous writing and reading.I think this is everything. For the typo and grammatical errors, I can only ask you readers to point it out for me to fix. I only use Grammarly and Docs to correct the mistakes and surely they're not perfect.If I still missed a point that you feel like its a blunder of the novel, feel free to comment it below and I will answer them to the best of my understanding of my own work.Thanks for reading. :)

you know why i rated it low despite liking it? just simple, you always mention ding! 125 exp increase but unlike any game there isn't even a character status or an exp bar! how do you if the mc levels up? according to the author's decision? what is the basis of ranking up? and there are skill points but no use! you have left too many holes to the story. i can barely stay reading it.

"Not much of a talker huh? Do you not speak English?" Harry stopped bugging the man seeing as he was unresponsive. He thought to himself 'there's no way he doesn't speak English, he filled out that form. And it was completely in English. Maybe he's tired. Yeah, that must be it.'

"Alright. I know that I can't persuade you. Just always take care of yourself and remember to call us if you are in trouble. Do you understand?" Suzy rest her case and watched her lovely daughter eats her breakfast. She really missed Sammie and wants to spend more time with her.

A golden aura formed around my body as I started to grow I went from 5 6 to 6 2 hard six pack abs that rivaled Vegeta from dbz