The Forgotten Tales of Nathos

Whats wrong with this story OVerdescribiNg everything to the extent it gets really boring Explaining how he put his hand in a monster head in (the last killing move) took a full half chapter 6 or 7 paragraphs You gan imagine how long the fight took lolThe atory is great but So tar it is 60% fillers

After reading this comments I thought it will atleast be ok but no. Mc is blinded by a girl he even forgot that he is a director, he is a recently growing director but he wants to waste his energy on chasing a girl. This is the reason why I hate Romance it may be good in real life but when writing romance author's just write cringe in the name of romance...... He is a director and the first fl I mean chaterine is just a new debuting actress but she just goes against director again and again and also mc always forgives her and he will also apologize her f*ck this sh*t just because he liked her he lowers himself. I can't even think a scenario where a director Apologizes to a new debuting actress who even questioned his words. And i don't think there are any brain-dead debuting actress who would do that like questioning director words Just so that he rempered her

I'm only slightly biased because I'm a fan of the author, but I like the novel so far 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

I'm sorry, going by the comments the story may be good, but the translation is so bad I could not get past the ninth paragraph of the first chapter.

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li qiye domination was quite good in other novel mc fight with old monster our mc is the oldest monster                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

Hoho, 10th review. Excellent.                                                                                                                        

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