trash novel, better not vote this novel. since we already have tons of novels like this.the same as any other trashy novel. dunno why people read these type of novels. Looks like they still haven't gotten out of their trashy novel phase
Bro I will support you man, but you gotta do a better job with the MC. He’s is a f*****g beta man. Come on you could portray him better than that. Idk if you plan on fixing his mentality as the story goes on but right now your MC is making story suck. It’s my honest opinion man. Everything else is dandy, your MC is just not cutting it.
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Já vou falando isso aí é bem narzista pó eles matavam o seu próprio povo por não lutar cara, dava pra ter criado uma história melhor sobre mudança ne não
[Who is Superman and who's this Saiyan, Mommy??An expert stronger than me? Anyway, you need to test it out yourself, Mommy, as I'm not too sure. After all, you had absorbed the essence of a peak-leveled noble spirit beast which was slightly weaker than the me before my breakthrough. Although it was only a bite, you would've died from the over-abundant of energy. Puff! Just like that, you would've exploded into bits and pieces of shattered flesh!] Kuro made a puffing motion with his mouth and flapped his wings to imitate how flesh exploded and scattered as he detangled himself from Hana's neck.
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