The Emperor'S Path

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Reviewing my own work xD But I sure do hope you will enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it ^^ This book is very precious to me. Have fun and don't hesitate to give feedback! I'm always happy to read comments, reviews, and of course, criticism! <3

Everything is very good….except the use of western name.Author, if u don’t know the gender of a first name, don’t know how to use first name and surname, and even mistaken one character for another, just don’t use them and keep to eastern names.In first chap i thought it was a mistake but I am at 120 chap and it is the same. There is at least 1 mistake by chap. It seems to me u don’t care about ur story.

Love the story, A few grammar errors here and there, but not bad.  It is a great new take for a cultivation novel. Not the same old story redone with new characters.  Good job, can't wait to read more.

The speaker is certainly the burly man which Lord Jiang met before. He is standing at the edge of the ship without Lu Yan realizing when he has arrived. With one of his word the kid has leap over the other ship easily.

Roland immediately halted misstep and check stared at the screen displaying the Quests Assigned by the system

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