The Elixir of Life

Perfectly written..hope to see a new chapter soon?

Review for Chapters 71-80: The chapters are consistent and on this chapters, we got to recuit more people and retrieve other family members though not all of them. There's also something that is looking over the MC for a split second that was never found though we never know who, could be in the future chapters.We found a weakness for the special that we have. Training for melee weapons started weirdly? Though everything is explained properly and it was funny as hell at the end. Continue on doing the great work dude and I'm slowly catching up!

Look, the story itself is amazing and funny. The story itself is an amazing read. HOWEVER, the translator sucks. He disappears for weeks at a time leaving you hanging with no reasoning behind it. He doesn't communicate with the readers or even give an excuse for why he disappeared. So I recommend this story, but don't expect much from this translator.

I didn't read even one chapter yet and i am already giving it a rating. This is completely illogical and at the very least idiotic for me. What can one do? Some times one can only be blind fools. Even if this is the trashiest of book, i cannot regret it. It is an Ergen book after all. It has been years since i have read anything by him, the writing was absolutely not perfect and it is unfortunate that my reading time is not much now, but this book is automatically in the library and a minimum rating is also given. Ergen still deserve some blind faith given his past deeds.

give us moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Fucking great, I love everything about it, the only downside is that there isn't more of it! Warhammer for the win! What more do I have to say to get to this fucking 140 word limit?

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Review chapter 1-62. I'm giving this one  a five star for now, the MCs logic is quite hmm believable but sometimes annoying and the author knows he needs to add logic in every possible way because of the worldbuilding but..I'm curious how they are communicating and words just translate but how do you explain words so foreign like fashion to a caveman and they somehow grasp it?