This will be a long tale.Not only mine but also theirs.The humans, the other races, even the gods to some extent.I truly hope you enjoy it.This way they will not only live in my memory...
Really big fan of this story so far! It is very well written without too many noticeable mistakes, has an interesting no nonsense MC (with a good excuse for why he would be living in a game world 24/7), and the game world itself is extremely enticing already with plenty of room to grow as the story progresses. Can't wait to read more!
This review is written after reading the latest chap at this moment. (Chapter 7)I'm not the type of person who casually gives a half-hearted review to please others and I'm brutally honest about it... Perhaps...Anyway, the writing quality is quite good and there were no major mistakes that could take one away from their reading immersion aside from a few tense shifts. But the latter can be worked on through editing.5 for story development. There were no forced interactions and everything seemed logical so far. Just that, the gods felt so weak in my opinion.Characters aren't fleshed out yet and this might be because of the lack of chapters. This includes the MC himself. <- This opinion may change depending on how the author approaches this point.Update Stability 5Aside from the characters, the setting wasn't properly explained yet. Again, this might be because of the lack of chapters. But the good thing is that I can see development in this area.All in all, this book has the potential to reach top 100 for originals (based on my experience). Only of course, if the book manages to get its well-deserved attention.
This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Give it a try; as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I will improve as I keep on writing PS. Positive Suggestions are always open and welcome.
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