It was a good start loved the intresting and intriguing setting of the story can't wait to read more..... the introduction of the villian was nice i hope to see more character development still but overall it was nice
Hello author! I'm leaving a review. The story is good and interesting. The humor is also on point and I already like the two idiots. The only problem is that, you sometimes go too far in your paragraphs, making them long. And sometimes, it feels rigid, like AI. Maybe you use ai for grammar checks but apart from that, this book is very good. I'm new on Webnovel and this is one of my first reads and I must say, I'm very impressed. Good luck
This is a rare 5 stars from me simply for how unique it is! On a platform full of harems and fantasy, we get a story about sports of all things! It's wonderfully crafted and definitely worthy a read! I am not into sports at all IRL, but I will be eagerly watching for updates here!
This book makes me want to rip my hair out, it was good at the start, but then there is a 12 year time skip. After the skip the story isn’t nearly as entertaining, and the chapters keep repeating and retconning things that just happened. One chapter will end with x character being knocked out in a room. To them have the next start with the same character outside prior to being knocked out except this time they don’t get knocked out. Or they will be going to the capitol for a ball “in a few days” to then not go to the capital right away, and when they get there they go “we have to leave because we don’t want to be near the royal family.” It’s stuff like that, that really kills my enthusiasm for this book. Though Mary is very entertaining.
get full Stars from me because it deserves it, In the beginning the FL is a bit naive and seems to be really young in her way of thinking but i like it in some way because her growth is great in the story, the other main characters are well done too and the story is nice to read so 5/5
Guys, please add collections,there are only 10 hr until the contest starts and I was late in joining the contest so I am already joined in the last days so please help with a collections so I can catch up a little
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